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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Butterfly

    Ok, so this probably isn't my best work, but I'll post it anyway. I'm just glad I wrote a halfway decent poem. A speck of color Sits on a flower ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Tourist

    Tourist The first thing that strikes you Is the heat. The unrelenting Punishment of the sun. The smells of Opium, incense and dust smother you In a suffocating blanket. Everyone ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Every Holiday is Halloween

    [pre]Come time to wrap the presents, Christmas, Valentines, birthdays, anniversaries, people have tendencies they normally don't. They put on the masks of generosity and happiness, while they delve de

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blue Manhattan

    I like how it provides detailed stuff, but, it can be a bit better. I like it, but add more detail in it. Keep up the good work! -Rick

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Toy Boat

    I remember sailing across the oceans, finding myself lost and drowning until your hands picked me up and became my guide, my sanctuary. I happily sailed through your tub of ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Fear thee whom I loved

    I am reading Twilight right now finally, and this just popped in my head. I Fear thee who I loved By Angel of Death I fear thee who I loved ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Spay and Nueter your pets

    How does this inspire people? It doesn't make any sense. -Rick

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My man

    Excellent poem. I really liked this. It's suitable enough for school. I'm sure everyone will love it. Keep up the good work! -Rick

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sing Softly--so

    Erm, not really good with the rythm and words. I think this needs to be revised. Good luck with any future work, Keep up the good work! -Rick

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Clouded care

    Welcome to YWS. I really like this as a starting poem. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward into checking out any future work you plan on doing. ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Don't Long to be a Chart

    Hmm...Via, it's good, but it didn't really peak my interest. I think it can be done better. Keep up the good work. -Rick

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: No More (I'm done)

    I want to take up my thoughts of you and throw them in a fire to watch them slowly burn. I want to rip out your heart, tear it slowly ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: subtle-pretty

    to gouge this grainy wind which walks so free, (proving life's existence with no intermittance) would be so icily cruel, like the bladed sun which shakes and breaks the gossamer ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Post-Op

    This is amazing. I really liked this. Keep up the good work! -Rick

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: My Bands Lyrics by Benny

    [pre]Why! Is it so, that you go, leave me all alone. Blind! It's not my fault that I'm not worth you, you make me feel so alive, but then you ...

    Feb 28, 2008


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint